Monday, March 19, 2012

Show Not Tell

Zooming down the black hole I thought to my self when dose it end. Then I saw light as I was speeding. As soon as I finish my turn I got up and had another one.

1 comment:

Darius said...

Hi Kingston

You have a very good vocab like Zooming down the black hole. There's just one mistake you have it is the second sentence it doesn't make sense to me. But anyway make sure you keep up the posts.