This is my second draft
Walking to school with a big smile on my face, my mum said to me “you're going to have fun don’t worry”. Saying goodbye was the hardest thing to do because I didn’t know anyone . She left like she had super speed, I couldn’t see her so I Awkwardly walk inside the classroom and said hi to my teacher her name was Mrs Maude.
I hooked my school bag on a hanger and sat down waiting nervously. I was about to bawl my eyes out when this boy came up to me and said “Do you want to play with me”. “YEEEAAAH” I just made my first friend “WOW”.
We played lots of games like lego and other sorts. BUT.... when mrs Maude called me to her table I didn’t know what to expected. I sat down and she gave me a book to read. “ You did well Kingston ” Mrs maude said to me. I was so happy that I jumped of my chair.
Brrrrrrrr Brrrrr Brrrrrr I wondered what the sound was So I ask my teacher “Mrs Maude what was that sound it sounded like the fire alarm”. She said “ no silly that’s the morning tea bell my darling”.
Getting my lunch box out of my bag like it was gold I had know idea what to eat. So I got yummy sandwiches out and ate the whole lot. I was still hungry so I nearly ate my whole lunch.
Playing around with my new friends was really fun. I still play with my friends from when I was little to now.
Today we had 40 minutes to write about our first day of school. From looking at our writing we are going to set some writing goals for the term.
Walking to school with a big smile on my face, my mum said to me “you're going to have fun don’t worry”. Saying goodbye was the hardest thing to do because I didn’t know anyone in room 2. She left like she had super speed, I couldn’t see her so I Awkwardly walk inside and said hi to my teacher her name was Mrs Maude.
I hooked my school bag on a hanger and sat down waiting nervously. I was about to bawl my eyes out when this boy came up to me and said “Do you want to play with me”. “YEEEAAAH I just made my first friend at school” I said to myself.We played lots of game but when mrs Maude called me to her table. I didn’t know what to expected. I sat down and she gave me a book to read. “ You did good Kingston well done” Mrs maude said to me. I was so happy when she said that.
Brrrrrrrr Brrrrr Brrrrrr I wondered what the sound was So I ask my teacher “Mrs Maude what was that sound” she said “ that’s the morning tea bell my darling”. Getting my lunch box out of my bag I had know idea what to eat so I got yummy sandwiches out and eat the whole lot. Playing around with my new friends was really fun I still play with my friend from when I was little to now.
Walking to school with a big smile on my face, my mum said to me “you're going to have fun don’t worry”. Saying goodbye was the hardest thing to do because I didn’t know anyone in room 2. She left like she had super speed, I couldn’t see her so I Awkwardly walk inside and said hi to my teacher her name was Mrs Maude.
I hooked my school bag on a hanger and sat down waiting nervously. I was about to bawl my eyes out when this boy came up to me and said “Do you want to play with me”. “YEEEAAAH I just made my first friend at school” I said to myself.We played lots of game but when mrs Maude called me to her table. I didn’t know what to expected. I sat down and she gave me a book to read. “ You did good Kingston well done” Mrs maude said to me. I was so happy when she said that.
Brrrrrrrr Brrrrr Brrrrrr I wondered what the sound was So I ask my teacher “Mrs Maude what was that sound” she said “ that’s the morning tea bell my darling”. Getting my lunch box out of my bag I had know idea what to eat so I got yummy sandwiches out and eat the whole lot. Playing around with my new friends was really fun I still play with my friend from when I was little to now.
