Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Killing Captain Max

Unfortunately AJ had been kicked out of school and his only option was to become a pirate - just like his dad had been. His main dream was to kill that man that had murdered his father, only 10 years earlier.
When he was at the dock this strange man came up to him and said ”Do you want to be a pirate?” Next thing he knew AJ was laying on the ground. So when he got up he saw he was on the Heartbreaker Ship. Looking out to sea, AJ was so amazed. The strange man came up to him again and said “So, do you want to be a pirate?” AJ replied “Yeah I will be a pirate.” “Well my name is Captain Max.” said the strange man.

AJ’s mother was very sad as she had always wanted a better life for her son. But she knew that she must wish him well. As a sign of good luck she gave AJ his father’s lucky eye patch to carry with him always.

AJ had found the person who had killed his father, the very same captain of the boat he was sailing on! - Captain Max. He found out some Information that Max killed my dad. He went in his room and was looking for him and when he saw him he was on the ground holding a picture of dad and said I am sorry that I killed you.
AJ knew that he had to take revenge for his father. Very quietly he snuck up behind Captain Max and said calmly, “I know you killed my father!”
The battle began. AJ tried to kill Max but no matter how hard he tried he just couldn’t because Max was his Dad’s best mate. AJ asked Max “Why did you murder my dad?” “Because I wanted to be the best on the ship and to be Captain.” Max answered. Then he got down on his knees and started to beg “I am sorry for killing your dad, I’m sorry!” AJ didn’t care. He cut his head off and then gave it to the sharks.
Captain AJ took his new prize and sailed North, up the Eastern coast of the Americas. Here he was able to discover a new island, he named it East Lossandos. The island was filled with all kinds of exotic fruits. AJ knew that he needed to eat lots of fruit to save himself from scurvy.

His journey home was very long because there was this massive ship in front of the Heart Breaker. AJ tried to go around the ship but it was to huge, so the he couldn’t belive he had to wait and wait. On the next day the ship was gone, AJ said now we can go back home.

When he got to the dock his Mum was there waiting for him. AJ got off the ship and gave his Mum a kiss and said I killed the man who murdered dad. His Mum was proud of him and glad.

1 comment:

Brandi said...

Hi, Kingston!
I am a student at the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama, USA. I am in Dr. Strange's EDM 310 class where we are learning about blogging and the benefits of using technology in the classroom. I love your blog! Great story about Captain Max and AJ. Did you do the illustration video by yourself? I enjoyed getting to know you through the great invention of the internet!