Little Red

                                                      

kind	bad temper
dose work around the house	needs to get birbe to do the smallest things around the house
good little girl	bad girl
happy	sad
grateful	ungrateful
likes to walk everywhere	like to sit and do nothing

SIMILARITIES

In the traditional story little red riding hood was a good little girl. In the story I read little red was a girl that didn’t like to listen to her parents. She has to be bribed to do the smallest things around the house. Her parents asked her to go to her grandmothers house but she wouldn’t go, her parents gave her money just to take cheesecake to her grandmother.

CONTRAST


Little red has a bad temper and complains all the time she asked to do something. She was in the woods going to her grandmother's house when she saw the wolf. She started to run but the wolf was just behind her when she sprinted down to her grans house. Red waited for the wolf to run in the garden shed and she slam it. She rang the zoo and said “there's a wolf in my garden shed” “we are on the way”. She went in said and she saw a note on the bench. It said “Hi darling sorry about the ants I’m in the shed getting ant rid”. The zoo people came with a net and a gun and they opened the shed door, the wolf was sleeping. The zookeeper told little red that wolfs only sleep with a full stomach but red just remembered the note it said "I am in the shed if you need me".

Zombie and the three human's

Intro:

“Hey boys are you ready I’m just around the corner” said Kington the oldest brother. As he pulled into the driveway Dee and Golden ran down the driveway, chucked their gears in the truck and were off ready for a bush sleep....




P1:

On the way to the campsite they all saw something moving slow and grooving through the woods. With a scary fact they thought it was Bigfoot following them all the way to the site. Until they saw what ever was following them they wouldn’t shut their eye’s. After a while they hopped out of the car and they couldn't see anything but nice people having fun.




P2:

They finally had set up in a tent each but lucky for the richest and oldest brother Kington who had enough money to buy him a cabin. After 8pm the camp lights had to be shut down and everyone had to go to sleep. Dee heard a noise and he thought it was just the water pipes. Rahhhhhhhh!!! and Dee ran to the other side while Golden who was playing a trick on him laughed away. Vzdrrsfhdfghdft and Both of them shouted ahhhhhhhhhhh a zombie. They were both stuck in the tent and the zombie was blocking the door. When they were trying to rip the tent the zombie bit them and then there were 3 zombies.




P3:

All three go to Kingston's cabin but can't get in. They try around the back but Kington doesn't even know what's happening. He decides to go and explore the campsite but before he left he put on a fire to warm up his house. When he was cutting the wood he saw this block that said peligro (DANGER) don't put by hot surfaces. But in spanish. But he put it inside. While he went to go get some food the 3 zombies got in the cabin, but by time they got in he was gone. KAAAAABOOOOOOMMMMM!!!!!!! the house and the zombies went flying. As soon kington heard and saw the explosion in the air he ran to the ranger and said his cabin just blew up.




The oldest brother Kington was looking for the two younger brothers after the explosion. He was looking for them for ages until he found there bodys in the woods. Kington was so sad that his brothers died so he looked for the killer. But he then realised that it wasn’t a human the killed him is was the explosion in his cabin. He saw a bite mark on both of their neck’s and then Kington knew something was after him when the explosion happened. Suddenly something was looking at him behind the tree is was the Zombie “ahhHhhhhhhhh”. Before you know it he was eaten alive.

Narrative Story

There is nothing here but of massive gold mine looking straight at me. I was beginning to look for gold, suddenly a pack of wild wolves were running towards me. I thought for a moment there I was going to die but I killed them with my own hands.




The moment I saw the gold I was thinking of buying everything in the world. Pirates were at the back of me, one of them knocked me out and took the gold for themselves. By the way my name is Rambo and I am turning 13 in 6 days getting back to the story. The men were stunned to see me on the ground for about 5 minutes, I got up really slowly and I told my mates we are going to find them and get back our gold.




The only place you can find pirates is on the sea so we went down to the beach and looked around. We sat for a while and then I saw same people talking far away. It was the pirates I said “ they have my gold lets get them” we ran after them. They saw us so they ran to, I pushed the man who knocked me out and said don’t take my gold ever again. “ I got the gold I got the gold” I said to my mates Lets run back to the mine.




“WE HAVE THE GOLD” yay we got it, we shared it between 3 people. I was walking home looking at my gold, I tripped up and My gold went into the drain. “ My gold is gone NOOOOOOOOO” I walked home with nothing what a shame. I hear a bell when I knew it was just a dream I got up and I was laughing “HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA” it was a dream. Through the open door I could see A big bag of Something on the table, it had my name on it. It was the gold, what I thought it was just a Dream, The doorbell rang. I opened the door and there was a pirate outside my house. I screamed “ AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” don’t take my gold, Trick or treat. Lucky but I don’t have lollies sorry but then I thought for a moment The gold is chocolate silly me. :P

New South Wales victory

I can not belive ut hat New South Wales won the first game of state of origin. I knew they were going to win I just knew it . Jarryd Hanyne (aka the Hayne plane )  scored the first try of the night . Jennings got pass five people to score that amazing try.

I've been supporting the New South Wales (aka blues) from about the first time I watched it on the tv. My favourite highlight in all of the matches I have seen would have to be the fights.fighting is not good but when someone starts it you got to finish it but you don't have to fight. On the night Paul gallen had a fight with Nate miles.  

My favourite try's would have to be the hayne plane was on the wing and he chip kick it over billy slater and the plane scored. The next one was Jennings try last night it was amazing, who can do that get pass all those players. The most favourite try would have to be well let's find out on the second game. 

The line up this year is the best line up they put up for a long time because it it the first time nsw has won the first game in a long time. Who say they can't win the second game we will win automatically but we have to play the third game . Lets go new south,we can get Queensland hopes up but I think we are going to win this.

LET'S GO NEW SOUTH WALES!!!