tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6767008069158712576.post618390665446657814..comments2013-12-15T05:18:20.960+13:00Comments on Kingston P: A Cold Day At The BeachPES Blogs Administratorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17359536147314284796noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6767008069158712576.post-9042175820196685252012-03-04T18:07:17.687+13:002012-03-04T18:07:17.687+13:00Wow Kingston
You wrote a fantastic poem about goin...Wow Kingston<br />You wrote a fantastic poem about going to the beach. I really like how you put a sad face on your writing because know that you were pretty sad when you had to go home. I can't wait to see your next blog post Kingston!.<br /><br />Keep up the good writing mate!!!.Samuelahttp://pessamuelaf.blogspot.co.nz/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6767008069158712576.post-81243868476347215202012-02-13T09:11:26.534+13:002012-02-13T09:11:26.534+13:00Wow Kingston
That was a great poem and what was e...Wow Kingston <br />That was a great poem and what was even better was that you didn't use the word'COLD', we're tryin to make the audience feel that way and you did. Next time try and make it a bit longer so that people get really hooked in :)<br />Keep up the good work<br />CruzCruzhttp://www.pescruzk.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6767008069158712576.post-76622863051106969232012-02-09T05:46:56.167+13:002012-02-09T05:46:56.167+13:00I kept in the car expecting that the sun would com...I kept in the car expecting that the sun would come out again. The blowing breeze flow turbine was getting more powerful and more powerful as the apply of the sea was reaching my windows.<br /><br /><a href="http://kingstoncars.org.uk" rel="nofollow">cab company in kingston</a>alastairsdixonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03352550371292491463noreply@blogger.com